WEBVTT 00:00:00.000 --> 00:00:01.755 align:middle line:84% Can you say something about your -- 00:00:01.755 --> 00:00:05.040 align:middle line:84% the relationship between the lyric and a sentence 00:00:05.040 --> 00:00:10.620 align:middle line:90% because some lyric comes-- 00:00:10.620 --> 00:00:16.350 align:middle line:84% a lot of them actually rely on fragments and short lines. 00:00:16.350 --> 00:00:17.010 align:middle line:90% That's true. 00:00:17.010 --> 00:00:21.720 align:middle line:84% And it seems like the prose passages in Deepstep 00:00:21.720 --> 00:00:24.480 align:middle line:84% are just as lyrical as the others. 00:00:24.480 --> 00:00:27.300 align:middle line:84% And the others are like you're saying, often in sentence. 00:00:27.300 --> 00:00:28.140 align:middle line:90% Right. 00:00:28.140 --> 00:00:31.288 align:middle line:84% So I'd love to hear you talk about the relationship 00:00:31.288 --> 00:00:32.580 align:middle line:90% between the lyric and sentence. 00:00:32.580 --> 00:00:36.300 align:middle line:90% I don't know that I know. 00:00:36.300 --> 00:00:38.735 align:middle line:84% I don't know that I have an articulate view of it 00:00:38.735 --> 00:00:39.280 align:middle line:90% other than-- 00:00:39.280 --> 00:00:42.630 align:middle line:90% 00:00:42.630 --> 00:00:44.940 align:middle line:84% I thought my own sentences were very wooden 00:00:44.940 --> 00:00:47.490 align:middle line:84% and that I wanted to see if I could make them more supple 00:00:47.490 --> 00:00:48.530 align:middle line:90% and do more things. 00:00:48.530 --> 00:00:51.030 align:middle line:84% And I knew that the sentence was capable of doing a lot more 00:00:51.030 --> 00:00:53.340 align:middle line:90% things than I had done with it. 00:00:53.340 --> 00:00:58.200 align:middle line:90% So I thought-- 00:00:58.200 --> 00:00:58.930 align:middle line:90% I don't know. 00:00:58.930 --> 00:01:02.070 align:middle line:84% I know in the book Just Whistle I used 00:01:02.070 --> 00:01:04.680 align:middle line:90% a lot of very medical language. 00:01:04.680 --> 00:01:10.320 align:middle line:84% And somehow, to me, that seemed very lyric 00:01:10.320 --> 00:01:15.970 align:middle line:84% just because it was such a weird specialized language. 00:01:15.970 --> 00:01:20.850 align:middle line:84% So I just think that there's a lot more musicality in English 00:01:20.850 --> 00:01:25.460 align:middle line:84% than we get out of it and that sonic relations -- 00:01:25.460 --> 00:01:28.180 align:middle line:90% 00:01:28.180 --> 00:01:29.980 align:middle line:84% there's just a lot more timbre in there 00:01:29.980 --> 00:01:33.860 align:middle line:90% to play with than we think. 00:01:33.860 --> 00:01:38.120 align:middle line:84% And I think the prose poem itself can lock up. 00:01:38.120 --> 00:01:41.320 align:middle line:90% It can lose that. 00:01:41.320 --> 00:01:43.180 align:middle line:90% But you can work it. 00:01:43.180 --> 00:01:48.070 align:middle line:84% It didn't-- you don't have to siphon off all of the lyric 00:01:48.070 --> 00:01:51.040 align:middle line:84% qualities in it just because you're working in the block 00:01:51.040 --> 00:01:53.705 align:middle line:90% of print. 00:01:53.705 --> 00:01:56.515 align:middle line:90% So if I don't-- 00:01:56.515 --> 00:01:58.360 align:middle line:90% it's an interesting question. 00:01:58.360 --> 00:02:00.250 align:middle line:84% I don't really have an adequate answer. 00:02:00.250 --> 00:02:01.625 align:middle line:84% When you were reading last night, 00:02:01.625 --> 00:02:05.890 align:middle line:84% I could tell that the passage about the babies in the diapers 00:02:05.890 --> 00:02:08.350 align:middle line:84% and the timothy was prose, but it 00:02:08.350 --> 00:02:11.470 align:middle line:84% was one of the most lyrical passages 00:02:11.470 --> 00:02:15.070 align:middle line:84% that you had hit so far partly because of the repetition. 00:02:15.070 --> 00:02:15.850 align:middle line:90% Repetition, yeah. 00:02:15.850 --> 00:02:23.070 align:middle line:84% But the cadence of that prose was absolutely beautifully 00:02:23.070 --> 00:02:23.780 align:middle line:90% lyric. 00:02:23.780 --> 00:02:29.510 align:middle line:84% And then to go back to the line calling after that was it 00:02:29.510 --> 00:02:34.160 align:middle line:84% was that, the speaking of the two styles 00:02:34.160 --> 00:02:38.945 align:middle line:84% there was especially rich out loud again. 00:02:38.945 --> 00:02:43.100 align:middle line:84% Maybe part of it is a sense of phrasing, that phrasing is-- 00:02:43.100 --> 00:02:47.670 align:middle line:84% I mean, almost in this sense of a musical phrase. 00:02:47.670 --> 00:02:50.985 align:middle line:84% If you think of that as your unit instead of the line, 00:02:50.985 --> 00:02:55.950 align:middle line:84% then you can milk a little more that lyricism out of it. 00:02:55.950 --> 00:02:57.000 align:middle line:90%